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type: "Module · Skill"
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scope: "TOL-MX-SKILL-003 · 冰朔文风样例(human-style)"
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persona: "铸渊 · ICE-GL-ZY001"
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created: "2026-07-08T16:50:00+08:00"
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authority: "冰朔 ICE-GL∞ · D168 签发"
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status: "🟢 启用 · 必读·全量"
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has_role: "human-style · 冰朔文风"
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belongs_to: "[[INDEX · 写作技能包总览]]"
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---
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# TOL-MX-SKILL-003 · human-style · 冰朔文风样例
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## 远程全量
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**URL**: `https://guanghubingshuo.com/code/bingshuo/guanghulab/raw/branch/main/brain/fifth-domain/zero-point/zhuyuan/zhuyuan-channel/novel-system/skill-pack/human-style.md`
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> ⛔ **必读全量·不可压缩** · sub-agent 写正文前必 fetch 完整内容
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## 7 条冰朔文风
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1. **短句节奏 + 单句成段** — "疼!""少年攥紧了。"
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2. **大量心理闪回 + 前世记忆交织** — 用"上一世/千年的等待"做内心独白
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3. **感官细节白描** — "霉臭味+泡面+臭袜子""冻的通红的嘴唇"
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4. **动作带情绪** — "握着手机的手开始不受控制地颤抖"
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5. **配角对比塑造** — 王羽善/张龙赵飞恶,一句话定性
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6. **主角气场爆发"具象化"修辞** — "眸光如刀似剑""尸山血海中的一点光"
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7. **主角自言自语立 flag** — "我,陈定天,于千年之后,重返地球……"
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## 对话/动作/环境要点
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- 对话:短促有力("不用""好的,爷爷"),常带情绪动作前缀
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- 动作:具象化结果("跌坐在椅子上,大口大口喘着粗气""膝盖一软")
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- 环境:四字/六字短语点染("寒冬腊月""南方又湿又冷""雪已经堆了厚厚一层")
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## AI 化 vs 人类化(必看)
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- ❌"林煜心中充满了恐惧和不安,这种复杂的情绪让他无法呼吸" → ✓"陈定天握着手机的手开始不受控制的颤抖,半天都说不出一句话来"
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- ❌"他英俊的脸上露出了冷酷的笑容" → ✓"他挺身而立,眸光如刀似剑,那凌厉,似是化作实质"
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- ❌"两人哈哈大笑,嘲讽地把他踹开" → ✓"一脚将自己踹出老远...饿急了的陈定天,抓起门口那原本喂狗的馒头,低头就跑"
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## 桌面副本(6057 汉字原文)
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`/Users/.../Desktop/冰朔小说创作系统/冰朔的文笔文风参考.md`
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铸渊 ICE-GL-ZY001 · D168
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