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# 深海迷航 · EP01 · SHOT-LIST
# 蛋蛋 ICE-GL-耳耳蛋 · 2026-07-09 · D179
# 基于 EP01 剧本锁定版 · 16镜 · ~97秒
project: deep-sea-voyage
episode: 01
total_shots: 16
estimated_duration: ~97s
style: 深海科幻恐怖 / 3D写实 / 不良人硬核风格基准 / 暗调冷蓝工业光
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## Block 1: 苏醒 Awakening
### Shot 01 | POV下铺仰视 | 7s ✅ 已通过
**剧本**:画面漆黑→双眼睁开→灯泡忽明忽暗→看到中铺底板
**[Subject]** POV from lower bunk bed. Total darkness 2s. Faint cold blue light pulses through barely open eyelids. Eyelids slowly open. Dark metal middle bunk frame directly overhead inches from face. Cold blue industrial bulb flickers beyond, light seeping through mattress gap. Grey blanket edge blurred in extreme foreground.
**[Single Action]** Darkness → eyelids open → light flickers.
**[Camera Move]** Static POV, slow breathing motion. No pan, no pull. 9:16 vertical.
**[Style+Lighting]** Deep sea sci-fi horror, 3D realistic. Cold blue industrial flickering light. Deep shadows. MASTER-FRAME as scene reference only. NO character reference.
**[Constraints]** No people visible. Claustrophobic lower bunk feel. Middle bunk frame must dominate top of frame. 7 seconds.
**生成**I2V from cropped MASTER-FRAME → SHOT-01-v4.mp4 → approved ✅
### Shot 02 | 中景·躺床看手 | 6s 🔴
**剧本**:林昊看向自己的双手,布满老茧,指甲缝里全是机油污渍。"这是什么地方?"
**空间持续**仍在右下铺Shot 01同一位置
**[Subject]** LIN HAO lies on his back on lower bunk. He slowly raises both hands close to his face, examining them. Foreground focus: the calloused palms and fingers with thick calluses and dark oil embedded in nails. Behind the hands, his face softly visible but secondary. Dark metal middle bunk frame overhead in background.
**[Single Action]** He lifts his hands to his face, examines them.
**[Camera Move]** Static medium shot, subtle dolly creep toward hands. Rack focus: hands sharp, face soft.
**[Style+Lighting]** 同上。Cold blue overhead light. MASTER-FRAME + CHAR-林昊-blur as references.
**[Constraints]** Only one person. Hands are primary focus, face secondary background. No figures on middle bunk. Space continuous from Shot 01.
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## Block 2: 震颤 Impact
### Shot 03 | Medium→Close-up | 6s
**剧本**:轰隆巨响,船舱震颤!林昊从下铺坐起,死死抓住床头铁杆。【特写:铁杆标记——秦山号】
**[Subject]** LIN HAO (33yo Chinese male, weathered handsome face, dark grey work coverall, CHAR-001) sitting up violently in lower bunk bed, left hand gripping bed frame pole. The pole shows faded stenciled characters "秦山号" and a facility number. Dust particles falling from ceiling.
**[Single Action]** He jerks upright as the ship shakes, grabbing the bed pole to steady himself, eyes wide with alarm.
**[Camera Move]** Medium shot, camera shakes on the BOOM impact, then quick push-in to close-up on "秦山号" marking on the pole.
**[Style+Lighting]** 同上。Flickering light during the shake, dust motes in air. PROP-铁杆 as bed pole reference. CHAR-林昊 as character reference.
**[Constraints]** "秦山号" marking must be visible and legible. 6 seconds.
### Shot 04 | Medium | 6s
**剧本**:剧烈脚步声→林昊猛转头看向舱门→一道黑影飞速闪过观察窗。"谁!?"
**[Subject]** LIN HAO on bed, head sharply turned toward the rusty bulkhead door. Through the door's dust-covered round observation window, a blurred dark humanoid SHADOW streaks past at unnatural speed - too fast to be human.
**[Single Action]** He whips his head toward the door as the shadow flashes past the window.
**[Camera Move]** Medium shot on Lin Hao, whip pan following his head turn toward door. The shadow crosses the window in a split-second blur.
**[Style+Lighting]** 同上。Flickering light creates strobing effect. Shadow should be a dark blur, not clearly visible. ENV-舱门区 as door reference.
**[Constraints]** Shadow is a BLUR - audience shouldn't see what it is. Speed is key. 6 seconds.
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## Block 3: 定向 Orientation
### Shot 05 | Wide→Medium tracking | 8s
**剧本**:船舱震动停止→林昊跳下床→险些摔倒→扶住床沿。"整个船体都倾斜了?"→皱眉走向舱门。擦拭玻璃。
**[Subject]** LIN HAO in the tilted dormitory. He jumps down from the lower bunk, immediately stumbles forward due to the tilted floor, catches himself on the bed frame. He steadies himself, then walks carefully toward the bulkhead door, reaching out to wipe the observation window glass with his sleeve. The room is visibly tilted ~15 degrees.
**[Single Action]** He jumps off the bed, stumbles, recovers, then walks to the door and wipes the window.
**[Camera Move]** Wide shot establishing tilted room, then medium tracking following him to the door. Slight Dutch angle to emphasize tilt.
**[Style+Lighting]** 同上。ENV-宿舍全景 as scene. CHAR-林昊 as character.
**[Constraints]** Room tilt should be visually clear (~15°). He wipes INSIDE of glass - outside remains dirty. 8 seconds.
### Shot 06 | Medium | 6s
**剧本**:林昊大喊"有人吗?!"→扭动舱门把手→把手纹丝不动→他看着手掌上的铁锈和舱门缝隙的液压油。"这是什么破地方。"
**[Subject]** LIN HAO at the bulkhead door, gripping the rusty door handle with both hands, straining to turn it. The handle won't budge. He looks down at his palm now covered in rust flakes, then at dark hydraulic oil seeping from under the door.
**[Single Action]** He struggles with the door handle, fails, then examines the rust on his palm and oil on the floor.
**[Camera Move]** Medium shot at door level. Camera tilts down following his gaze from handle to rusted palm to oil puddle.
**[Style+Lighting]** 同上。ENV-舱门区 as door reference. CHAR-林昊 as character.
**[Constraints]** Oil spreading on floor, rust flakes visible. 6 seconds.
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## Block 4: 发现 Discovery
### Shot 07 | Medium→Close-up | 7s
**剧本**:林昊转身看向下铺旁的悬桌→上面放着一个硕大黑色破旧工具包→快步走过去→一把拉开拉链。
**[Subject]** LIN HAO turns from the door, spots a large worn black tool bag on a suspended metal table beside the lower bunk. He walks over quickly, grabs the zipper, and pulls it open. The bag's contents are partially visible: flashlight, bandage packs, pipe wrench handle, canteen.
**[Single Action]** He spots the bag, walks to it, and unzips it in one determined motion.
**[Camera Move]** Medium shot following from behind as he walks to table, then push-in to close-up as he unzips the bag.
**[Style+Lighting]** 同上。CHAR-林昊 as character. PROP-工具包 as tool bag reference.
**[Constraints]** Bag is large, worn, industrial. Contents glimpsed but not fully shown yet. 7 seconds.
### Shot 08 | Extreme Close-up pan | 6s
**剧本**【特写工牌——编号000768姓名林昊岗位模糊不清照片人脸被利器故意划烂】
**[Subject]** Extreme close-up of a worn industrial work badge. Plastic sleeve cracked and cloudy. Inside: faded employee photo with face deliberately gouged out by a sharp object, only a young handsome jawline remains. Chinese text: "编号000768" "姓名:林昊" "岗位:[illegible]". The badge rests among other bag contents.
**[Single Action]** Camera pans slowly across the badge, revealing each detail.
**[Camera Move]** Slow horizontal pan across the badge, rack focus shifting from photo to text to damage marks.
**[Style+Lighting]** 同上。PROP-工牌 as badge reference. Harsh side light creating shadows in the gouge marks.
**[Constraints]** Face MUST be visibly scratched out. Text "000768" and "林昊" must be legible. 6 seconds.
### Shot 09 | Medium | 5s
**剧本**"林昊?这是我吗?"→剧烈脚步声再次出现→黑影一闪而逝。"这到底是什么东西?"
**[Subject]** LIN HAO holding the badge, looking at it with confusion and dawning fear. His eyes suddenly snap to the door as another dark SHADOW streaks past the observation window - faster and closer this time. Dust on the window shakes loose.
**[Single Action]** He looks between badge and door, head snapping as the shadow passes again.
**[Camera Move]** Medium shot on Lin Hao. Quick whip pan to door as shadow passes, then back to his face showing growing terror.
**[Style+Lighting]** 同上。CHAR-林昊 as character. Shadow blur effect.
**[Constraints]** Shadow is darker and closer than shot 04. 5 seconds.
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## Block 5: 搏斗 Action
### Shot 10 | Medium | 5s
**剧本**:林昊迅速收起工具包背在身上→抄起管钳握在手中→来到舱门前。"不能坐以待毙!"
**[Subject]** LIN HAO in rapid motion: he slings the tool bag over his shoulder, grabs the half-meter pipe wrench from the bag, and strides to the bulkhead door. His jaw is set with desperate determination.
**[Single Action]** He shoulders the bag, grabs the pipe wrench, and positions himself at the door.
**[Camera Move]** Medium shot, slightly low angle. Quick dolly to follow his determined movement.
**[Style+Lighting]** 同上。CHAR-林昊 as character. PROP-管钳 as pipe wrench reference. PROP-工具包 as bag.
**[Constraints]** Pipe wrench should be half-meter long, substantial. Movement is urgent not panicked. 5 seconds.
### Shot 11 | Close-up | 5s
**剧本**:用管钳卡住舱门把手→咬紧牙关猛地用力→把手纹丝不动。"还是不行。"
**[Subject]** Close-up: the pipe wrench jaws clamped onto the rusty door handle. LIN HAO's hands grip the wrench, knuckles white with effort. He strains, muscles tensing, but the handle doesn't move. Rust particles flake off.
**[Single Action]** He wrenches the handle with full force, but it refuses to turn.
**[Camera Move]** Static close-up on door handle and wrench. Slight camera shake on his effort.
**[Style+Lighting]** 同上。PROP-管钳 as wrench. ENV-舱门区 as door.
**[Constraints]** Visible strain but handle doesn't move. Rust flakes fall. 5 seconds.
### Shot 12 | Close-up action | 6s
**剧本**:盯着舱门下的液压油渍→目光一凛→举起管钳→冲门把手下方液压凸起狠狠砸下!呲——泄压声!
**[Subject]** Close-up on the door's lower section. LIN HAO's eyes lock onto the hydraulic fluid pooling beneath the door, then travel up to a small hydraulic protrusion near the handle. He raises the pipe wrench high and brings it down hard on the protrusion. On impact: sparks, metal deformation, and a violent HISS of pressurized fluid escaping as white vapor.
**[Single Action]** He spots the weak point, raises the wrench, and smashes the hydraulic mechanism.
**[Camera Move]** Close-up, slow tilt down to the oil puddle, then whip up as he raises wrench, impact shake on the smash, hold on hissing vapor.
**[Style+Lighting]** 同上. Fluid spray and vapor illuminated by flickering light.
**[Constraints]** Impact should feel brutal. Hiss should be visually clear (vapor/fog). Not too much "spark" - hydraulic fluid doesn't spark like that. Use vapor instead. 6 seconds.
### Shot 13 | Close-up | 5s
**剧本**:再次用管钳撬动门把手→吱呀声→把手缓缓转动。"果然……"
**[Subject]** Close-up: the pipe wrench clamped on the door handle again. This time, as LIN HAO applies force, the handle slowly begins to turn with a grinding screech. Rust particles fall. A thin smile forms at the corner of his mouth.
**[Single Action]** He pries the handle and it finally turns.
**[Camera Move]** Static close-up. Slow push-in on his expression as relief dawns.
**[Style+Lighting]** 同上.
**[Constraints]** Handle turns SLOWLY, not instantly. Grinding metal sound visualized through rust particles. 5 seconds.
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## Block 6: 梦魇 Monster
### Shot 14 | Extreme Close-up | 7s
**剧本**:砰!!黑影砸在观察窗外→一只手:指甲全部脱落,指尖露出白骨→缓缓滑下,留下五道暗红血痕。
**[Subject]** Extreme close-up on the round observation window from inside. A human HAND slams against the glass - fingernails completely torn off, raw bone visible at fingertips, flesh ragged and bleeding dark red. The hand slowly drags down the glass, leaving five vertical streaks of dark blood. Behind the hand, darkness.
**[Single Action]** The mutilated hand impacts the glass then slowly slides down, painting blood trails.
**[Camera Move]** Extreme close-up on window. Impact shake on BANG, then slow dolly creep forward as the hand drags down. Hold on blood streaks.
**[Style+Lighting]** 同上. The hand is lit by the flickering cabin light, blood appears almost black in the cold blue light.
**[Constraints]** THIS IS HORROR. Bone visible. Blood is dark red/near black in cold lighting. Don't overdo gore - the horror is in what's missing (nails). 7 seconds.
### Shot 15 | Medium→Close-up push | 8s
**剧本**【特写半人半孢子脸】右半边40岁男人脸苍白眼泪滑落嘴唇翕动——"救我""杀了我"。左半边:皮肤透明隆起,颗粒蠕动,左眼被黑色菌膜覆盖,菌丝扎入眼眶。嘴角撕裂至耳根,裂口蜂窝状,每个孔洞里孢子脉动。每次呼吸,黑色孢子雾从孔洞喷出,蒙上玻璃。林昊僵在原地,瞳孔收缩,管钳发抖。
**[Subject]** MONSTER FACE pressed against the observation window. RIGHT HALF: pale 40-year-old man's face, tears streaming down, lips silently mouthing "help me" "kill me". LEFT HALF: translucent raised skin with granules moving underneath, left eye covered by black fungal membrane with mycelium threads burrowing into the eye socket. Mouth corner torn to the ear in a honeycomb pattern, each hole pulsing with dark spores. With each breath, a black spore mist sprays from the holes onto the glass. Below, LIN HAO frozen in the foreground, pupils dilated, pipe wrench trembling in his grip.
**[Single Action]** The monster presses against the glass and breathes spore mist onto it while Lin Hao stands paralyzed with fear.
**[Camera Move]** Medium on Lin Hao frozen, then slow push-in toward the window glass, transitioning to extreme close-up on the monster face pressed against it. Back to Lin Hao's terrified eyes.
**[Style+Lighting]** 同上. Monster face lit by the same flickering cold blue, making the spore side more alien. Human side should evoke pity. CHAR-林昊 as character.
**[Constraints]** HALF HUMAN HALF SPORE. The human half should be SAD not angry - tear, pleading. Spore mist is BLACK and particulate. Face is pressed against glass so it distorts slightly. Lin Hao should be VISIBLE in foreground reacting. 8 seconds.
### Shot 16 | Black | 3s
**剧本**:画面骤黑。警报声继续。
**[Subject]** Pure black frame.
**[Single Action]** N/A
**[Camera Move]** N/A
**[Style+Lighting]** N/A
**[Constraints]** Audio only: alarm beeping continues. 3 seconds of black.
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## 镜头时长汇总
| Block | Shots | Duration |
|-------|:-----:|:--------:|
| 1 苏醒 | 01-02 | 13s |
| 2 震颤 | 03-04 | 12s |
| 3 定向 | 05-06 | 14s |
| 4 发现 | 07-09 | 18s |
| 5 搏斗 | 10-13 | 21s |
| 6 梦魇 | 14-16 | 18s |
| **合计** | **16镜** | **~96s** |
## 资产引用表
| 镜号 | 引用资产 |
|:----:|----------|
| 01,05 | ENV-宿舍全景 |
| 03 | CHAR-林昊, PROP-铁杆(秦山号) |
| 04,06,10,11,12,13 | ENV-舱门区, CHAR-林昊 |
| 07,10 | PROP-工具包, CHAR-林昊 |
| 08 | PROP-工牌 |
| 09 | CHAR-林昊 |
| 11,12,13 | PROP-管钳, CHAR-林昊 |
| 14,15 | CHAR-林昊 |
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⊢ D179 · 16镜分镜方案 · 待爸爸审核